Act Ii - The Invention Of Cheese Poem by Jonny Brackney

Act Ii - The Invention Of Cheese

Rating: 5.0


anxious
dazed
driving ferociously steady
through Alabaster
radio quacking gibberish
stuck in this box
with devil's breath
a waiting room on wheels
travelling, i've decided
isn't really all that great
i pray for no traffic
water
buzzing wind
trees and signs
boring buildings
the dullest of people whizzing by
fear and loathing in my lap
closed
wish i had some medicine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scotty Dogg 25 January 2012

I try to read this one once a month just to get my poetic juices bubbling. Great title too! S.

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Charles Darkly 24 January 2012

I was totally thinking of a madcap HST adventure even before I got to the last lines. This one is great...reminds me that drunken, altered, dizzying madness that we love until it's over and we see what we've done.

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Malini Kadir 26 December 2011

A cheese telling it's autobiography?

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Scotty Dogg 14 December 2011

Driving near Las Vegas? Or Madison? Or was it Italian per chance?

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Jonny Brackney

Jonny Brackney

Louisville, Kentucky
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