Admit It! Poem by analou pabalate

analou pabalate

analou pabalate

bacolod city, negros occidental, philipines

Admit It!



we do not know where we go..............
we do care where we wanna be.............
but sometimes we fail.............
to walk with our dreams..................

we love to stroll the world..........
we wanted to vacate our land of burdens...............
we want to escape the prison of needs and wants...........
but in the end we feel lacking.................

we want freedom very much...........
but we are afraid to admit.............
that freedom is not only in money and wealth...........
but having a peace of mind.........


really?
is it?
i guess so......
maybe.........

agree?
it's up to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 28 May 2008

Not only in money in wealth but in peace of mind...truer words have never rung out...excellent dude, first time ive read...i really enjoy your stuff though. Easy to understand, and with good meaning

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Ency Bearis 25 May 2008

I agree...well done.... Ency Bearis

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Estrella Baldemosa 24 May 2008

true......thanks for the poem

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bacolod city, negros occidental, philipines
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