Adventure Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Adventure

Rating: 5.0


My grandfather, Charlie
Began that family trait!
He had a moving company...
The first of its kind,
In a city that draped its hate!
They didn't say it openly,
But it was known to segregate.
And Charlie did the best he could,
To see his family didn't suffer and ate!
And the family grew to be much more than eight!
By the time I was eight my grandma and pop...
Had popped out eighteen!
My uncle Gay Hall and aunt Virginia,
Were the last to dropp on this scene!
And Charlie saw it well,
That grandma never worked...
She had raised Twenty-one of her own.
And it was always an adventure then,
To see who would love...and to see who love would hurt!
To watch mama and papa take care of their kin!
Nothing what I've done has ever been
That adventurous to be driven
To protect AND defend!
Not to us who didn't know
What we know now but not back then.
Not back in those days!

Nothing what I've done
Has been that adventurous on my plate!
I'm glad my grandpa gave me a little taste of my fate.
I guess my grandpa left me something,
I could easily neglect...no matter what the debate.
Easily if not injected with a bit adventure in my blood...
And 'gifts' he left me I will always respect!
And much appreciate!
Because of my grandpa,
Any adventure from a kindred center,
Growing with it and letting it create!
I've always wanted that next adventure....
One
To be the very best...and giving me the shakes!
Thinking of adventure as something to expect!
Wanting more each time its done.
Wanting it just like sex! I guess.

Nothing what I've done of late...
Has made me want adventure less!
Nothing I can remember in September.
Maybe
When it begins to become cool and shady!
And just 'maybe'...
I'll suspect and seize the adventure in October,
If it presents and these attached
Grandpa family tied 'adventurements'
Don't drive me crazy!
Sometimes we have to give time just to be lazy!
To rest and refresh!

Special thanks:
Diane Violet
For the closing line in this poem!
AND I've since 'added' onto 'that line'!
Thanks again, Dee...
~for 'refresh'~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Lambert 15 August 2009

Hi Lawrence, My, you're a prolific poet! I like this one, the story you tell, the truth in your words. Frank

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Diane Violet 01 October 2006

I like this ending, we have the luxury to be lazy and refresh. All the best, Diane

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Diane Violet 01 October 2006

I'm speechless and honored. Thank you Lawrence. Diane

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 October 2006

Ladies and gentlemen of PoemHunter.com What Diane Violet has stated in her opening line to me I've snapped up and made it the closing line in this poem! Removing my original line completely!

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Diane Violet 01 October 2006

Suspect and seize the adventure in October if it presents. Wishing you the suspense of adventurism, not sure if that's a word but it sounds good :) . All the best, Diane

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