David Knox

Rookie - 100 Points (honestly why would i tell you? / does it matter?)

Adversity - Poem by David Knox

Sometimes it's the trial that makes us grow
The hard times when I really know
It's when time keeps us apart
That I know I'm in your heart
Every time we don't talk for awhile
I have the biggest smile
Because talking again is the sweetest relief
My consolation before He returns like a thief
It's when our relationship whatever it may be
Is tested by time and distance... that's when it's real to me
The longer we're apart the more I want you
The farther we're apart the more I feel you
I'm not sure if this is love, but I know no other
Not sure if this is love or just a cover
But when adversity attacks- that's when my love grows strong
That's when I know this will last long
Adversity makes our love, last a lifetime.


Comments about Adversity by David Knox

  • (4/10/2010 2:15:00 PM)


    What you say is very true; distance and adversity tests the strength of a relationship. However, what's even more pleasurable is how you express this idea in a very sweet and adorned way. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 1 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 10, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 11, 2010


[Report Error]