Affective Poem by elena winters

Affective

Rating: 5.0


Eyes of a crystal ball telling the untold
behold the truth which i try to withdrawl
that consience taunting me in the back of my mind

hence the word ventriloquist
with arms inside my back
don't motion my lips to speak against my will
for i will pay the consequences

so just let me be
let me suffer horridly
for good despite evil

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

you said it right, Breeze...meaningful artful write...ten for you

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Ron Flowers 16 December 2008

I like this one very much. Let me be the first to give it a 10. Regards Ron

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