Sad I was thinking of goodbye,
the breeze passed caressing me,
tears wrapped in sobs
dampened in grief
they babbled seizing a
fragile broken heart without dreams...
I think about death and sometimes
I wish her like a child who wishes
an ice cream on furious burning days,
I don't know when my turn will be!
The anguish that I carry
sighing entangles the feelings
and tricks the thoughts that
overflowing with sublime love for Being...
Days and afternoons pass perfumed for
hide in the sad abyss of the night,
the silver-tinted Moon lights up the surroundings,
submissive in grief I try to elude hugging the
loneliness that tiptoes over the gloom
she fades pale with the vague pain she enjoys...
John F. Bisner Ureña.
A poem so touching, and full of melancholy, I am mesmerized, this lovely sad poem deserves 5 Stars full on Top! Thank you so much for sharing this scintillating poem
At times, I see poems not getting the reading they deserves, and those not deserving so much getting a number or reads. This is such an example. Good verses. I hope it gets lots of reads.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
but dear Luis, you forgot to describe your responses about this brilliant poem. Do not pay attention to what is not, but respond to what here IS.Thank you!