After Long Struggle Finally Victory Poem by Charles Chaim Wax

After Long Struggle Finally Victory

Rating: 3.9


Following three years without a contract
the union settled
nothing but givebacks
but that’s the way it is these days
anyway got a big check for back pay
and immediately bought
a Nikon which could
transfer images directly to my computer
without wires.
I journeyed to the Pier in Coney Island
lusting for the sea, sky, clouds
and the infinite combinations
these natural wonders
gave to humans
then spotted a blind man on a bench
his black Labrador retriever
resting serenely at his feet.
I stared at his gorgeous face
constructing an entire existence
from the electro-magnetic waves
leaping from his brain to mine
a hobby, although few believed
this talent to be mine
when suddenly
he began biting his nails.
I had never seen a blind man
bite his nails
why this should have amazed me
I really don’t know
but it did
then he rolled half the leash
it was a long leash
into a tight circle
and once compacted
he unrolled it
and then repeated the process
three times
until the chewing started up again
when without warning he said,
“Fight it. Fight it.”
but didn’t have to
not for me
I had already felt
the majesty of his mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... ... 22 December 2005

i have to agree with denis on the point that the more i've read your work the more i've been taken with the journey...6 or so weeks ago i just read it on and off but didn't feel i had proper access into what you were doing but in the last week or so that's altered and i'm making sure to read each piece you post.

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***** ********* 22 December 2005

I found your meandering poetic prose completely absorbing, And note with interest, the reference to telepathy. I believe we all have the ability, but it depends on us to access it or not. We do affect eachother in thought, I have found, that when I think of a friend I haven't heard from, for instance, they suddenly ring me or turn up! Uncanny to say the least. 10 from still biting her nails! ! tut tut. All the best for the coming Christmas and new year to you. Smiling Tai

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David Darbyshire 22 December 2005

I have a couple of blind friends here in Holland, I always feel 'funny' when I say 'see you Later ' I wonder if should say that? nice poem dave

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