i watch as she walks away
my head hurts
my heart hurts
all of me hurts
as she walks out the door
why did she meet him
why did she love him
why doesnt she love me
anymore
my heart starts beating like
a drum i dont want to let her go
i say dont go please dont go
i love you i love you
she dosen, t even look back
she i called an angel
now she takes my heart
as she walks out the door
i feel a wetness upon my face
tears run down my cheeks
i who haven, t cried since i was twelve
as she walks out the door
so much hurt i feel inside
confusion twirling inside
my heart feels ready to explode
as she walks out the door
days go by and nights to
weeks turn into months
until i meet some else
who heals my heart with
gentle words
after she walked out the door.
This gives me the same sad feeling as the song entitled, 'She's out of my life', by michael jackson. Very well written poem. Thanks for sharing.
very well-written..... something i am afraid of experiencing..
such a great poem it fits me perfect wish i had the words to express my breakup....i dont but you did for me thanks
this is a very good poem full of passion and you made me feel so sorry for you....... would you like to come and read 'The Rose'? I'll post it in a moment.... Ruth: -)
I felt the pain in your words...you have touched me. That is what poetry is about. Good job. Anna
You describe a pain unlike any other. It may not be the worst kind of pain, but boy does it hurt! We feel so lost, alone, a sense of failure. You said it all in your poem. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
true to every man who has loved & lost what we don't understand & why.