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Saturday, June 19, 2010

After We Met - The First Time

Rating: 2.9
First Meeting, between you and me
Has caused a sweet sensation deep within...
My life has changed in one single moment
I am no more the guy I used to be....

Seems you have come straight to me from above
To hold my hand, bring me love
Now I have met you, my love, my destiny
Found the happiness, which was missing in me....

After we met, the first time, my mind lost its control
Can't stop myself either, my heart is on a roll...
Feelings deep within; Emotions; Testing Times
All of them say, Sweetheart, I wanna make you mine....

I sense, this feeling is ecstatic; this feeling is new
You've made me fall in love; This is all coz of you
Life is suddenly so beautiful; Love keeps me surround
I see you everywhere; See you all around....

Very First Meeting, between you and me
Has aroused never felt emotions deep within...
My destiny has changed in one single moment
All I say, I am no more the guy I used to be....
Rohit Sharma
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COMMENTS
Monique Sapla 25 August 2010
This is a really beautiful poem you are so inspirational..
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Marieta Maglas 11 August 2010
This was a very intense piece...well expressed ideas....
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Renee Ho 01 August 2010
This is a lovely poem. I liked your last stanza the most. 'Very First Meeting, between you and me Has aroused never felt emotions deep within... My destiny has changed in one single moment All I say, I am no more the guy I used to be.... ' Keep writing!
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‘Now I have met you, my love, my destiny Found the happiness, which was missing in me....’ ~ And you’re in the canvas of Aphrodite….so no way out of return…. Nice diction congrats for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
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Unwritten Soul 03 July 2010
I think she must be an amazing girl! Just look by all your poem, she inspired u very much... belting u with love theme word, even i can taste of the sweetness here...I am so happy for you two. I hope this love will stay longer...and i know love is immortal...what a nice poem u done here
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Christina Torres 30 June 2010
where did you get these writing skills. its like it come naturally. i love it. i have to go with Mrs. Anita 10++
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Anita Trivedi 22 June 2010
its so beautiful feeling that god has given us and you have written beautifully i dont have words to discribe..........10++
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Jc Lunaria 20 June 2010
if i could just meet the person u met... for sure i would come up with this astonishing pen work.. im glad you finally met some one that changed some part of you.. good job... great job....
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Stunning! What true love is all about. Enjoyed the read! ; D
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Amrit Rathi 19 June 2010
Your poem is very beautiful! Well crafted. I loved it. What you have felt happens as the ego boundaries of two lovers goes away momentarily and they feel ecstatic. But love is something that starts later on totally different plane, read my latest poem: I've fallen in love. I give it9/10. Thanks for inviting.
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