After We Met - The First Time Poem by Rohit Sharma

Your poem is very beautiful! Well crafted. I loved it. What you have felt happens as the ego boundaries of two lovers goes away momentarily and they feel ecstatic. But love is something that starts later on totally different plane, read my latest poem: I've fallen in love. I give it9/10. Thanks for inviting.

Stunning! What true love is all about. Enjoyed the read! ; D

if i could just meet the person u met... for sure i would come up with this astonishing pen work.. im glad you finally met some one that changed some part of you.. good job... great job....

its so beautiful feeling that god has given us and you have written beautifully i dont have words to discribe..........10++

where did you get these writing skills. its like it come naturally. i love it. i have to go with Mrs. Anita 10++

This is a really beautiful poem you are so inspirational..

This was a very intense piece...well expressed ideas....

This is a lovely poem. I liked your last stanza the most. 'Very First Meeting, between you and me Has aroused never felt emotions deep within... My destiny has changed in one single moment All I say, I am no more the guy I used to be.... ' Keep writing!

‘Now I have met you, my love, my destiny Found the happiness, which was missing in me....’ ~ And you’re in the canvas of Aphrodite….so no way out of return…. Nice diction congrats for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

I think she must be an amazing girl! Just look by all your poem, she inspired u very much... belting u with love theme word, even i can taste of the sweetness here...I am so happy for you two. I hope this love will stay longer...and i know love is immortal...what a nice poem u done here