After You Left -02 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

After You Left -02

Rating: 5.0


After you left
It all became so empty.
So lonely, So silent!
The thin air around
Caught fire, became violent.

Clouds of hopelessness
Blackened the sky of my heart
The saline tides of separation
Flooded the green lawn of
All my sweet dreams.

Wednesday, May 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship,love and life,lovers,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 20 January 2018

Flooded the green lawn of All my sweet dreams. Beautiful expression. Good poem

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Thanks Rimi for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Alina Kaikeyi 29 September 2017

Clouds of hopelessness Blackened the sky of my heart The saline tides of separation Flooded the green lawn of All my sweet dreams. Nicely penned and shared. 10++

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Thanks Alina for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Anita Aparajita Das 17 May 2016

After you left It all became so empty. So lonely, So silent! The thin air around Caught fire, became violent. Clouds of hopelessness Blackened the sky of my heart You have delivered the pain of separation successfully. Nice to read. Thanks poet.

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Thanks Neetu for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Asit Kumar Dhir 17 May 2016

Clouds of hopelessness Blackened the sky of my heart The saline tides of separation Flooded the green lawn of All my sweet dreams. Beautiful expression. Good poem.

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Thanks Asit for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 12 May 2016

The saline tides of separationFlooded the green lawn ofAll my sweet dreams. I loved these lines.10 for this poem. Thanks. Seema

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Thanks Seema for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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