After You Left -01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

After You Left -01

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There was a miracle
This morning!
As the first sun shine
Touched me
As if it whispered
Something in my ears-
A news-
Secret yet frightening,
Small yet devastating,
It increased the beats-
My heart swelled to explode.
As if, all of sudden
Million tides rushed
Into the banks of
Our river of separation.

It said
You are leaving today!

A smoky cloud was
Covering the distant valley,
Blurring the vision,
All your memories, at once,
Were all invoked within me.
Felt like flying up to there,
Where this moment, you are.
Would meet those eyes, hazel
Through the blue curtains that fall.

Wednesday, May 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship,love and life,lovers,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asit Kumar Dhir 19 May 2016

As if it whispered Something in my ears- A news- Secret yet frightening, Small yet devastating, It increased the beats- My heart swelled to explode. As if, all of sudden Million tides rushed Into the banks of Our river of separation. Nice reading. Beautiful poem.

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Asit, Thank you dear for this kind words of encouragement.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 09 September 2019

A great poem. Thank you sir for sharing. 10++++++

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Rajendra Rout 10 May 2018

A smoky cloud was Covering the distant valley, Blurring the vision, All your memories, at once, Were all invoked within me. Felt like flying up to there, Where this moment, you are. Would meet those eyes, hazel Through the blue curtains that fall. A beautiful poem of

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Seema Sharma Rimi 20 January 2018

My heart swelled to explode. As if, all of sudden Million tides rushed Into the banks of Our river of separation. Nice reading. Beautiful poem

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Rimi, Thank you dear for this kind words of encouragement. Thanks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 29 September 2017

A news- Secret yet frightening, Small yet devastating, It increased the beats- My heart swelled to explode. Nice poem shared. 10++

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Alina. Thank you dear for this kind words of encouragement.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 22 May 2016

A smoky cloud was Covering the distant valley, Blurring the vision, All your memories, at once, Were all invoked within me. Felt like flying up to there, Where this moment, you are. Would meet those eyes, hazel Through the blue curtains that fall. Beautiful poem describing the pensive moments of a lover. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Thank you dear Sanjukta for this kind words of encouragement.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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