Afternoons Poem by Blue Moonlight

Afternoons

Rating: 4.8


Arrangements of life's lost commodities,

Further buried under absurdities.

Tender efforts at pushing them away,

Envelope me with things to do today.

Refinements of a coarse reality,

Never will I seek practicality.

Obsolete hopes keep my feet on the ground.

On tightly gripped hands, I keep what I've found.

New beginnings start with the last endings.

Sunset marks the process of hearts mending.

Sunday, March 11, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 19 March 2012

Great poem to ponder, and nice rhyme scheme

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Wahab Abdul 11 March 2012

i found the poem an excellent one, the thought is well crafted and well knighted, keep writing

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Luna Tsuki 11 March 2012

Beautiful! i loved it

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Luna Tsuki 11 March 2012

Beautiful! i loved it ^ ^

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