Afternoons Poem by Blue Moonlight

Afternoons

Rating: 4.8


Arrangements of life's lost commodities,

Further buried under absurdities.

Tender efforts at pushing them away,

Envelope me with things to do today.

Refinements of a coarse reality,

Never will I seek practicality.

Obsolete hopes keep my feet on the ground.

On tightly gripped hands, I keep what I've found.

New beginnings start with the last endings.

Sunset marks the process of hearts mending.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 19 March 2012

Great poem to ponder, and nice rhyme scheme

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Wahab Abdul 11 March 2012

i found the poem an excellent one, the thought is well crafted and well knighted, keep writing

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Luna Tsuki 11 March 2012

Beautiful! i loved it

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Luna Tsuki 11 March 2012

Beautiful! i loved it ^ ^

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