Agony Of First Love Poem by Qiniso Mogale

Agony Of First Love

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The heart won't release the one
it loved first
The heart won't let go of the one
it first loved
She is supposed to be long forgotten
She is supposed to be long forgotten
The heart still holds on
The heart lingers on
The love of the first love lives on
Agony of the first love.

The heart still loves the one it
first loved
The love refuses to die
The love won't die
The love is supposed to be long dead
The love should have long been buried
Agony of first love.

The mind long released the first love
The mind long severed ties
The mind understands it's over
The mind and heart are at loggerheads
The mind and heart are at war
The mind and heart are in conflict
The agony of the first love lingers on
The agony of the first love lingers on.

Sunday, July 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: modern
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 06 August 2017

It's an excellent poem! Very powerful and cleverly written. By the way, my poem is about something quite different, although I totally understand why you connected these two. You see, she married her first love, and is still married to him.

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Dustin Dawin 18 July 2017

The agony of the first love lingers on enjoyed poem I will more...

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 July 2017

Great write. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Qiniso Mogale 17 July 2017

I thank you Jazib.

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