Alankar(Decor) -214 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor) -214

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Challenge(Tripadi)

Tripadi in the Bengali Region is considered one line
in three parts even though it is almost always written in three lines.
So each tercet is simply a full sentence in 26 or 20 syllables broken into lines.

The Tripadi is:
stanzaic, almost always in tercets. A poem can have any number of tercets.
syllabic,8-8-10 syllables per line and sometimes 6-6-8 syllables per line.
rhymed, aax bbx

Challenge

A challenge to walk on a rope
Though a fall takes away all hope
Is to best learn how to fall before start

Life is like walking on a rope
Learning to cross pitfalls with hope
Life will then be safe and pleasant till end

Monday, November 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 November 2015

Is to best learn how to fall before start Verily, a solution to the task

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Rajnish Manga 09 November 2015

One of the most original idea in the process of learning 'Is to best learn how to fall before start'. Thanks for sharing, Indira ji. Special thanks for giving the details about Tripadi.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2015

Hope is to best to learn how to fall before start and accept challenge again. Interesting and wise sharing...10

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