Alive** Poem by Milica Franchi De Luri

Alive**

Rating: 5.0


Stumbled out
of bed
seeing
everything red.
To proof
i am not dead
stood upside- down
on my head.
I felt odd
I talked to God
i thought
he talked back.
He said;
Your glass is half full!
Have a nice day
Don't forget to play.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

‘Your glass is half full! /Have a nice day/Don't forget to play.’ Glass is half full …are we half hearted to God? … ‘Play’ ...to remember God with divine wish of ‘have a nice day? ’ thanks Pet you too have nice Poetic Day for poetry for us… 10 Ms Nivedita UK PS Concept is tangent…written in white ink? n

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2009

thought he talked back. He said; Your glass is half full! Have a nice day Don't forget to play..HE is so graceful to us and shower us with so many things otherwise we dalily die in our sleep never to see next again... well knit poem with ull faith in him.. we must enjoy whatever he has given to us and mind it we should always rememr him in prayer and should form the essence of our day to day life....10 read mine..pulled from deep sleep.....go bacl..... i am disgrace....what do i see

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Ramin Chaman 09 October 2009

A good work and a nice poem... And yes..a poem full of word's optimistic,10+

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Milena Veleva 02 October 2009

'stood upside- down on my head'... it really worked, thak you, Milica, a good work.

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Rakesh Bedi 01 October 2009

Lovely poem, milica.....especially....your glass is half full....quite inspiring and optimistic, dear....

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