Like peeling onions
removing the skin
layer by layer
all the while shedding tears,
so is emotional recovery.
Day by day;
putting the hurt behind,
reviling the inner strength,
life is good again.
The tears have washed the pain away
Subtle and touching, nice poem.........keep it up..........Read 'MY DREAM' in my poems and read SMILES as well..........shall be grateful to receive your feedback
i don't really know what to say, it was really really good
‘…shedding tears, so is emotional recovery.’ ‘Pain profiles endurance Tears dwindle durance ‘~ niv Nice symbolism of onion peeling used...thanks Ma’am… 10//10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
Life is a series of Layers, A layer of Mirrors of Layers of Mirrors mirroring a layer of Mirrors. I love this poem Thanks for Sharing and Your kind Critique of Mine. Kind Regards Philip
That was great how you described the peeling of an onion as the healing of pain.10 10 10!
women can cry it is expected but it is seen as unmanly for men to weep Thank gog im old enough to disregard such foolishness
such a touching write, from the heart. a good cry, not only gets rid of toxins, it shows light at the end of the tunnel. Mamta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
So sweet Such sublte mix Of Sadness and Hope Within the onion skin. A very good philosophy To be heeded by all! Thoughtful and profound So nice are your poetry! Angel