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All My Life

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All my life I've walked down this pathway all alone
Facing all my fears and trying to survive
Wondering will it ever be my turn to shine
Cause all my life I've wanted to be something more than this

Something more than this girl that I am
This isn't the girl I dreamed I would be
Want to be more than this
But I lost all hope and now I'm not sure what to do

I'm lost and alone
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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2015

This morning I read this poem of yours and was deeply touched. A perfect poem, free flowing like a natural stream, depicting the girl that you are, a girl in the dark seeking light. The four four liner stanzas perfectly hold the yearnings and trepidation of a solitary girl. Hope to read some more of your poems.

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