Comfortable in the mystical
Belief that by touching gold
You'll turn to gold, you smile
At those that plan your rape.
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Sink into your inadequacy,
Free yourself from your
Desperate and sad attempt
At chasing butterflies.
I love the sense of oddity in your writing. And everything you say is always the truth...
The thoughts in this one are evocative yet lingering. Made me do a double-take. Please read mine –Clowns – Adeline
mystical belief turns into belief reality, yet the powerless fear remains, control imposed upon us, our inadequacy to face overwhelming threat, the release from doomed desperate sad attempts, becomes butterfly flight transformation held in golden images elements of haunting appeal haunt the edges of this poem in interesting fusions :)
Oh, it's strong! I know the depth of these lines...Excellent write!
This poem is so unbelieveably, well like the Crimson Prince said, beautiful. I love all of your poetry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is such a beautiful poem love :) Almost as beautiful as you. ;) hehehehehehehhe