Old Teenage Poems


The Person I'Ve Become - Poem by Old Teenage Poems

What am I but a sinner
On a pediestal of lies
A queen of false relationships
Of hatred and dispise

What am I but a soulless
A black hole of empty years
I am just a shell these days
A shell with all her fears

I am but a dropp of water
In an ocean of regret
Nothing in particular
Still I must say I bet

If you look inside yourself
Somewhere you will see
There's a reason to why I am this way
This is what you made of me


Comments about The Person I'Ve Become by Old Teenage Poems

  • ... Lynch (8/12/2007 4:31:00 PM)

    Awesome poem. I can agree and/or relate to every line. -Kylie M. Lynch (Report)Reply

    casper(2/21/2018 10:11:00 AM)

    casper is here

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  • Amanda Saveley (7/30/2007 6:14:00 PM)

    What am I but a sinner
    On a pediestal of lies...

    I am still sitting on that. What am I but a sinner...on a pedistal of lies...I'll have to think that one over. I do think it is amazing that you are so bold with your declarations. It's a boldness that's hard to find in something that comes out as 'ME. MY FAULTS, ' rather than 'THE WORLD'S FAULTS.' Even I am guilty of that myself...

    What am I but a sinner on a pedistal of lies...
    Wow.
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  • Er Dr Pradeep Kumar MohantyEr Dr Pradeep Kumar Mohanty (5/18/2007 7:10:00 AM)

    Its a very bold confession. I admire your bravery. Keep it up. Thanx for your comments on my poems. - Pradeep. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 22, 2011


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