Alone Comments

Deep feelings of sadness of a life at deplorable low ebb is aptly captured in the piece. Your insight into the nature of loneliness occasioned by depression is impressive and your power of expression, great. A nice and insightful creation written with rhythmic splendour. Thanks for sharing Jay'Reeona and do remain enriched.

but never feel there isn't help, though it may be difficult to find or scary to seek. good luck with....whatever. to MyPoemList. bri :)

you are either a very imaginative, creative writer, OR a very lonely, tending-to-mental-illness CREATIVE WRITER. i wonder which it is. i hope you are not a poet/person who kills yourself before you get to enjoy more of life. i hope poetry is a good enough release for you IF you really have 'problems'! ! if you respond to my comment, please do so with a message, not (just) a 'reply' on this page; i rarely return to a poem page. (to be continued) ....

Powerful stuff, I think you have really experienced these feelings, to be able to write about them so well, like they say, you can't sing the blues, unless you've been blue....keep up the good work

Words of sadness are well-expressed here.... a perfect 10++++