Alone Poem by Asif Baloch

Alone

Rating: 4.3


Alone I stand
all the way to the end
no one's with me
no one to hold my hand
Sometimes!
I feel like a candle
in a hurricane
my life is like a picture
in a broken frame
no one will come for me
no one will be here
to give me love
to wipe up my tears

Sunday, June 22, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: hurricane
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna jonson 27 September 2008

good poem....10...........

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Ashley Power 22 September 2008

this is a really nice poem, very sad! ''sometimes i feel like a candle in a hurricane my life is like a picture in a broken frame' i liked these lines! good job

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