Another Sad Poem Poem by Asif Baloch

Another Sad Poem



I’m living on the edge of denial
With no feelings till I’m alive
God hasn’t even decide
To make me live or to die

Darkness and pity
My fate has put onto me
No love no destiny
Breathing in severity

No human no angel
I’m stuck into the middle
No one is at my side
Alone till I die

A cry came from inside
My thoughts has decide
Ordered my hands to write
Just another sad poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Abdullah 06 October 2008

Simply Loved how you Described Sadness in every line Good Write indeed

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Shimon Weinroth 13 September 2008

truly sad, the feelings expressed are genuine permit e perhaps some minor corrections hasn't even decided and last stanza (has decide) perhaps to decide

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