Selina Gurgacz

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Alone And Forgotten - Poem by Selina Gurgacz

It all began when I couldn’t walk,
They left me outside on the sidewalk.
With no food or water,
I thought that I would only last a day or so.

I was all alone.
As people walked by,
They just stared at me and kept walking.
I knew that after a while that I would loose my speech and my hearing.

Then I knew that I was certainly,
Alone and forgotten.

Comments about Alone And Forgotten by Selina Gurgacz

  • (6/21/2009 6:18:00 AM)

    this poem has a weird sense of sorrow in it....
    thank you.
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  • (11/12/2007 4:25:00 PM)

    Lina, placing yourself outside yourself and becoming something you have to use imagination to visualise is the first stage to being a poet. Writing only from within may give you a reputation but writing from without gives you a repertoire... Well done, Ivan (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2007 12:01:00 AM)

    A simply expressed poem about loneliness and alienation. Your show your reader your predicament without sharing too many details, which I like. It gives the reader a chance to use his/her imagination. My first reaction was that you were a little dog? Great title too. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2007 9:58:00 PM)

    That'ssoooooo sad. I'm sorry it happened. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011

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