Along The Beach Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Along The Beach

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When pleasant dreams greet me at night,
To seek your face that tender sight.
As shadows fall i drift asleep,
You are the soul i long to meet.
For without dreams I'd never be,
With you in my eternity,
So here i am with eyes closed tight,
Hoping I'll see you tonight.
I'm on a beach upon the sand,
You walk to me then take my hand,
We walk along the sandy shore,
We laugh and talk just like before.
I long to stay with you like this,
For your the one i sadly miss,
I hope we meet again tonight,
To walk with you till morning light.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isadora Quagmire 01 September 2025

Absolutely brilliant! You combine feelings of sorrow and longing in such a skilled way. Thank you for sharing this superb piece : )

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Jayne Louise Davies 03 September 2025

Thanks Isadora x I'm very greatful for your lovely comments x

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Sunny Quagmire 31 August 2025

Such a beautiful piece! How well it conveys how much you miss your loved ones! I love the dream imagery in it! Truly loved this poem!

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Jayne Louise Davies 03 September 2025

Thank you so much Sunny x Much appreciated!

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Timber Koleden 29 July 2025

A fantastic poem that is so full of longing, sorrow and nostalgia! Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminiscence!

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 September 2025

Many thanks Timber for your kind comments x

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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