I'll Hold You Close Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

I'll Hold You Close

Rating: 4.8


Distant memories lost in time,
I close my eyes and think of you.
Memories of the way we were,
Glaze my eyes, like morning dew.

I hear your voice so clearly now,
A loving smile, lights up your face.
We walk together, hand in hand,
Then head for home, that special place.

I miss your love, I miss those times,
The love you shared, your love for me.
It broke my heart, you fell asleep,
No greater friend will ever be.

I'll hold your memory close to heart,
Your love will flow within my veins.
I'll hold you close, right to the end,
My dear Mum, we'll meet again.

Jayne Louise Davies

Thursday, January 31, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem a few months back, it's dedicated to my Mum Amy who passed away four years ago. Always in my thoughts xx
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 02 February 2022

A wonderful poem about your mother. I like how you have such good rhyme and rhythm.

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Jayne Davies 03 February 2022

Thank you. I really do appreciate your comment.

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Tracy Warren 15 August 2023

so touching...

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 August 2023

Thank you so much Tracy : ) I appreciate your comments x

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Cowboy Ron Williams 20 July 2023

Great poem, Jayne, and congrats! It is still on the Best Member Poem list at #96.

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Thank you so much Ron : ) x

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This beautiful poem is now included in the Best Poems of Member poets. Congratulations, Jayne

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Thank you Unnikrishnan : ) I hadn't noticed x Thank you so much x

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Koffi Sossou 16 July 2023

The love ones are never forgotten. May she sleep with immortality.

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Bri Edwards 15 June 2023

Jayne, I plan to use this poem in my upcoming June 2023 Showcase of PH poems to which I gave 5 stars 'recently'. bri : )

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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