Will I See You Tonight? Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Will I See You Tonight?

Rating: 4.9


I long for the night,
When I'll hold you so tight,
In my dreams,
Once again we are young,
We are there on the beach,
Old age out of reach,
It's a fine day,
And we're having fun,
We sit on the sand,
Ice cream in hand,
Watching the tide come in,
The seagulls fly down,
Seeking food from the ground,
Making a right noisy din.
A walk to the fair,
We so loved it there,
And on the Big Dipper we ride,
Oh the fun that we have,
When with you I'm not sad,
I'm so happy when you're by my side.
All I have now are dreams,
It's the best it can be,
But that's not as bad as it seems,
When, my eyes close so tight,
Will I see you tonight?
Once again,
We'll be young,
You and me.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2022

A fabulous poem dear poetess, many congratulations! !

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Jayne Davies 02 May 2022

Thank you so much. It means a lot x

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Kim Barney 02 May 2022

Congratulations, Jayne, for Member Poem of the Day! Very nice.

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A lovely poem well expressed. Very touching. In our dreams and memories, our loved ones with us. Congratulations for a well deserved Poem Of the Day. An accolade you truly deserved.

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Jayne Davies 03 May 2022

Thank you for your lovely comment. I so appreciate it.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 May 2022

Oh those wonderful memories with the one you still love in your heart! And what a wonderful poem. Congrats, Jayne on a well deserved POD!

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Jayne Davies 03 May 2022

Thank you Richard. For your encouraging words.

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Jayne Davies 02 May 2022

Thank you everyone for your kind comments. It means so much x

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Chinedu Dike 02 May 2022

A beautiful creation elegantly crafted from the heart. Congrats on your poem's selection as POD, remain enriched.

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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