Will I See You Tonight? Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Will I See You Tonight?

Rating: 4.9


I long for the night,
When I'll hold you so tight,
In my dreams,
Once again we are young,
We are there on the beach,
Old age out of reach,
It's a fine day,
And we're having fun,
We sit on the sand,
Ice cream in hand,
Watching the tide come in,
The seagulls fly down,
Seeking food from the ground,
Making a right noisy din.
A walk to the fair,
We so loved it there,
And on the Big Dipper we ride,
Oh the fun that we have,
When with you I'm not sad,
I'm so happy when you're by my side.
All I have now are dreams,
It's the best it can be,
But that's not as bad as it seems,
When, my eyes close so tight,
Will I see you tonight?
Once again,
We'll be young,
You and me.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 05 December 2022

I love the beaches and icecreams but all come in my dreams lovely poemy ma'am

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 January 2023

Thank you for your kind comment x Much appreciate it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 May 2022

An energetic poem! Extremely well penned.....5 stars.

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

Jayne, I 'love' your story and its rhyming. Keep up the good work! ***** bri : ) and to my favorites on PH

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

Re: 'A walk to the fair, We so loved it there, And on the Big Dipper we ride, ', and I bet 'fair' means an amusement park & 'the Big Dipper' is a fun ride there, NOT a huge cluster of stars in the sky.

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2024

'Making a right noisy din.'...I bet many will not know what is meant by 'right'. I THINK it means 'truly' or 'truthfully' or 'certainly'. Hm?

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Esselebor Ebhojie 10 June 2023

Really tender and caring

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Thank you Esselebor : )

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Savita Tyagi 25 January 2023

Lovely poem. There comes a time when the world of dreams become so appealing. One is fortunate to be rewarded with beautiful dreams.

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 January 2023

Thank you so much Savita x

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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