Alternative Ii Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Alternative Ii

Rating: 5.0


Alternative, native, altar, alter, at, in, an, tin, tan, net, ten, heat, tea, eat;
Feel my love and feel the difference,
And like a colourful bird in the land of your muse.

Alternative, riven, rivet, tale, later, late, veer, veil, era, ear, are, ant, sate;
Feel my muse and feel my mind,
And like a singing bird in the land of your muse.

Alternative, tree, rate, van, vet, vain, vat, tail, tie, tear, rat, tar, naive, it;
And to satisfy the desire of your love in the land of your muse!
But i am all that you need on this side of the river.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 11 April 2016

Really fascinating and inventive work. You don't lack variety, Edward. I think I might just put you on my favourite poet's list, even though I've only read about six so far, one in German too! Tom Billsborough

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