Saturday, July 15, 2006

Ambrosia Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was the taste
Of salt water on those
Soft pillow lips that reminded
Him of making love to her on the beach...
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Goldy Locks 15 July 2006

'And he adored her.' nice pause - spiritual, gospel-like - before you start again with the fantabular descriptions.

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William Jackson 15 July 2006

Fantastic Images and allusions to the greatest of ancient literature. Great poem. I loved it! Thanks.

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Ray Forever 15 July 2006

ILovely! ! ! think you are the best romantic poem on PH...pls keep then coming! ! !

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Tsani Jones

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