Amen Poem by Asif Andalib

Amen

Rating: 4.3


Make worthwhile ink of my pen
Amen Allah please amen

Make worthwhile my sweet dreams
Can't you hear my soul's screams?

Make worthwhile my effort
Make me brave in your court

Make worthwhile my labor
Save me O savior

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sallam Yassin 11 September 2012

great and worthy may allah bless u thanks to share.

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Susanta Pattnayak 11 September 2012

Short, lucid and a nice poem. Thank You!

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Derek Haughton 11 September 2012

I echo what has been said in the previous comments, brief and to the point. Congratulations on making this invocation quiet, perceptive of self and respectful of the divine. I quarrel only with the rhyme dreams screams which goes agaqinst the prevailing tone.

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Kelvin Owusu 11 September 2012

make worthwhile not if im worthy, make worthwhile because im trying, this i enjoyed reading, its well written, meaningful and also personal

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Locura Alaam 11 September 2012

I like how it's simple and straight to the point. Some things are better said brief than wreathed with so much blabbery. keep it up

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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