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An Abandoned Factory, Detroit

Rating: 3.3

The gates are chained, the barbed-wire fencing stands,
An iron authority against the snow,
And this grey monument to common sense
Resists the weather. Fears of idle hands,
Of protest, men in league, and of the slow
Corrosion of their minds, still charge this fence.

Beyond, through broken windows one can see
Where the great presses paused between their strokes
And thus remain, in air suspended, caught

In the sure margin of eternity.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 09 February 2012

very well done... your images leap out and grab!

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G. Murdock 06 December 2005

Great Piece ....great descriptive indictment of rust. Also a great reality check on the fate of American workers.

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Michael Gale 08 April 2009

Great writing! A gifted talent that has written unique and so artful. God bless us all-MJG.

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Smoky Hoss 16 February 2015

An amazing metaphorical labyrinth of what was once a nations greatest hope, the assurance of lifelong stability, crushed by the very forces which created it. Leaving loss and confusion in it's pitiless wake. Powerful poem indeed.

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Glen Kappy 14 December 2016

this poem resonates in america today and is the reason many voted for donald trump. but mainly i want to comment on the craft of the poem. i'm not familiar with levine's work, but after reading this i want to read some more. this poem has a tight rhyme scheme and sticks with pentameter, but i hardly noticed it when reading. it flowed logically and naturally. he begins with the outside of the factory then moves attention to the inside through broken windows with muscular descriptions. the poem moves me not by telling me how to feel, but evoking feelings from the things described. i'm off to read more levine. glen kappy

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Richard Wlodarski 07 January 2017

Masterful writing from which I have learned technique to further enhance my writing skills.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 December 2016

Marvelous portrayal of an abandoned factory. Congrats on modern poet of the Day.

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Terry Craddock 14 December 2016

The gates are chained, the barbed-wire fencing stands, An iron authority against the snow, And this grey monument to common sense.... Men lived within these foundries, hour by hour; Nothing they forged outlived the rusted gears Which might have served to grind their eulogy. wow, so much written between the first and last lines, I particularly liked the images of 'broken windows', 'great presses paused between their strokes', 'air suspended, caught' and 'the sure margin of eternity.' this is a massive work with so many exceptional lines, a topic exceptionally well written in this poem, which is often a badly written topic makes 'An Abandoned Factory, Detroit' a masterpiece for me, even the title sets up wonderful resonant themes within the poem, loved this.

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