An Atmosphere Of Humility Poem by David Taylor

An Atmosphere Of Humility

Rating: 5.0


Tinkling chimes in wistful winds
incantations sung upon a breeze
and incense hanging in the air
flowers scent heavy laden
with petals falling gentle held
balls of ice high up high
descend and melt in soft blue sky
atmosphere more subtle still
carries feelings far from here
stars sing sweetly as they fly
through an airless empty darkness
far past the limits of earths carcass
and throughout with time its master
the universe spreads out faster
time is slowly slowing down
as the earth continues round
vast cosmic forces rule the heavens
man can wonder look with awe
but cannot influence what is there
introspective bound by forces
that keep to natural courses
no matter what your creed or faith
we have our time and place
humility is in the air
if we would just stop and look and care.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 29 January 2008

David, what wonderful lines you write, felt myself sinking deeper and deeper into this poem as I read. You certainly captured me with this one. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Ernestine Northover 18 January 2008

Splendid write David, the thought is awesome. Very enjoyable read indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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JoAnn McGrath 17 January 2008

Oh very profound David....this is a thinker...love it...: O)

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