Melissa Ferrer

Rookie (10/28/91 / New York)

An Away Message - Poem by Melissa Ferrer

God didnt promise
Days without Pain
Laughter without Sorrow
and Sun without Rain
But He did promise
Stregnth for the Day
Comfort for the Tears
and Light for the Way..

So at the moment i am not Here...
Im off enduring the pain the Laughter and the Tears
In all my fourteen years, I have never known...
That it was all meant to be..
Till now when i see...
That he is comforting me..

So im away
and i dont know if i will be back today
But I will definitely be back...
In time to help you pray...
In time to be there
for you
when you need me most


Comments about An Away Message by Melissa Ferrer

  • (6/26/2006 2:00:00 PM)


    The best I've read from you thus far, Melissa. Demonstrates a high level of maturity and wisdom. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/10/2006 12:39:00 PM)


    Really, really, really great poem, great flow, and really good idea! kev (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2006 7:17:00 PM)


    Melissa - a wonderful poem and a lovely flow of language. I lookd forward to reading more of your poems
    Terry
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  • (4/6/2006 10:50:00 PM)


    God didnt promise
    Days without Pain
    Laughter without Sorrow
    and Sun without Rain
    But He did promise
    Stregnth for the Day
    Comfort for the Tears
    and Light for the Way..

    Hi you make a good poem, with great visions and shadow of life, wish for best
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2006 9:20:00 AM)


    Realy it is great poem from any asspect, i can't say nothing more.keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • (3/28/2006 1:05:00 PM)


    A brilliant poem with some great religious imagery (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 25, 2006



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