Monday, May 19, 2025

An Endless Ache For Home... haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep inside, each heart.
There's a yearning, to be part.
Of Heavens, great chart.
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Rebecca Navarre
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Another beauty that stays in my treasure trove. Top Marks!

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Brilliantly crafted! The picture attached is so apt and enhanced the beauty of this amazing write.

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A very powerful poem of great faith yet so tenderly expressed. You have coined in a succinct poem that universal feeling to be with Him eternally.

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Sandra Feldman 21 May 2025

What grandiose Three Lines, so very true and deep with perfect rhyme! To be cherished forever

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Rob Lamberton 21 May 2025

Beautiful image, a bright poem!

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Timber Koleden 20 May 2025

Three longing strokes! We all want to go home in our own ways...

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Isadora Quagmire 20 May 2025

This poem, is beautiful! It is short yet deep. We all long for that place beyond the stars I think, and you have expressed this feeling marvelously!

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