Deep inside, each heart.
There's a yearning, to be part.
Of Heavens, great chart.
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Brilliantly crafted! The picture attached is so apt and enhanced the beauty of this amazing write.
A very powerful poem of great faith yet so tenderly expressed. You have coined in a succinct poem that universal feeling to be with Him eternally.
What grandiose Three Lines, so very true and deep with perfect rhyme! To be cherished forever
Three longing strokes! We all want to go home in our own ways...
This poem, is beautiful! It is short yet deep. We all long for that place beyond the stars I think, and you have expressed this feeling marvelously!
Another beauty that stays in my treasure trove. Top Marks!