Sunday, October 2, 2016

An Everyday Tale Comments

Rating: 4.6

The sky is so contradictory.
Everyday, It tells me a new story.
Alone on the road, Somebody has died I fear.
Lost their job today, another one sheds a tear.
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Shilpa Mallya
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Shilpa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 07 October 2016

Today, A million hopes are the norm, And a trillion dreams are on queue to form.... / The poet has presented glimpses of everyday life which is at once worrisome as well as driven by hope. Thanks.

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A creative composition that is rich n realism! Thanks for sharing!

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 October 2016

welcome at PH, Shilpa! Your 1st here is a good one.. keep on posting

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The Dishevelled Writer 02 October 2016

Thank you :)

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Chinedu Dike 02 October 2016

Good train of thought nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Mallya.

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Shilpa Mallya

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