Uriah Hamilton


An Exquisite Hurt - Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Love is exciting
Like Wild West gunfire
Friday night,
Tender mouths kissing
To a heartbeat rhythm
Pulsating body sexual heat!

I’m going to leap
Like a wild mountain goat
Over obstacles of regret
Until you place your hand
On my thrilling chest
And forget
Everybody else!

I’m electrified
When you
Take off your skirt
Or tug on my shirt,
Fantasy experiment
Crashes all my senses
With an exquisite hurt!


Comments about An Exquisite Hurt by Uriah Hamilton

  • Esther Leclerc (2/25/2006 6:27:00 AM)

    Makes you want to say that sex is all! (Of course, it's not; still...) (Report)Reply

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  • Joy Vanderhelm (11/17/2005 5:31:00 PM)

    I could feel the enrgy and the frenzy in this poem. I liked this very much. You have a really awesome grasp on description. (Report)Reply

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  • Marcy Jarvis (9/25/2005 12:24:00 PM)

    I love the energy in this one, Uriah. (Report)Reply

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  • Raynette Eitel (7/19/2005 12:50:00 PM)

    The first stanza carries the excitement...and your images are good. I love the title.

    Raynette
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  • Adriana Cruz (7/15/2005 6:38:00 PM)

    why do you place exclamation marks on everything? interesting... (Report)Reply

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  • Kathleen Paul-Flanagan (7/14/2005 7:38:00 AM)

    Good one! I really liked the first stanza best.... (Report)Reply

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  • Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (7/5/2005 9:26:00 PM)

    oooo....I felt that one. :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 5, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 6, 2005


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