It is raining
Slowly
In Detroit tonight.
It makes you think
God has
No sense of time.
Somewhere in the world
There is a girl
Who should have
Her forehead kissed
Before she falls asleep
Absolute Bliss for the eye, I'm sure that God is watching and her time will come, Love duncan X
Oh Uriah..I am sure that all the angels are watching over this poem...you make me sad and happy at the same tame..I have never thought about Gods timing that way I am sure that He has his reasons..Such a painfully beautiful poem from you-Pia
I love this as much for what it doesn't say as for what it does. Beautifully succinct! Joyce
WeLL you Have Written a wonderful poem Uriah..... well may be an angel Would do that and TrusT me whEn i teLL u that God has a Great senses of Time....lol nice one uriah **KoNi**
You're going to have to go out there and find her now Uriah. Good hunting. Love Ernestine XXX
As gentle and soothing as the falling rain. Heaven must truly smile on this one, Uriah. Warm regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a beautifully tender poem Uriah. I think the kiss to the forehead is such a delicate touch...I love that. It gives such a sense of security (I'm not sure why) . As you know it's been raining here for the last couple days...it comforts me to know you and I are sharing this same rain. Very nice work Uriah. Sincerely, Mary