An Ideal Couple Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

An Ideal Couple

Rating: 3.9


Why are w called an ideal couple?
Why are we free from any trouble?
Is there any hidden blessing from the almighty?
Of course yes we live on His good will and mercy

We have vowed not alienate each other
Stay tuned to right path and not bothers
We treat them equal like sisters and brothers
Love to youngsters and respect to elders

We have made it simple mission
Life is to be lived with lapse’s admission
There may be emission and omission
It is part of line and there remains no confusion

We know how far to go and stop
No sadness even if show flop
Stiff competition like walking on rope
Not losing sight and keeping live the hope

We may not be that ideal as it is claimed to be
Still we are at liberty to act free
Self contentment in life as that of tree
Life is to sail smoothly as we often agree

Life is as dear as wife
It may be difficult to on edge of knife
We never attempt or try to course the will
It is an earnest attempt to appreciate and feel

How can we respect each other and at the same time cling to role?
How to share the responsibility and own it as jointly or sole?
There is nothing wrong if go in for total success
You may still have the hurdles to gain the access

Life is still the same as two wheels of chariot
This fact must be understood even by idiot
Even if one develops some fault or snag
There should not be any attempt by any one to drag

It has to be resolved amicably
It has to be made peaceful and lovely
There is enjoyment of every kind
The real joy and purpose you may definitely find


Live the life to its full length
There lies your ambition and strength
You may sometimes face the formidable task
You may still be in position to over come and no one may dare to ask

Ideal couple means to couple with ideas and motive
One has to supplement each other and try to be supportive
This paves the way for smooth sailing
The chances may be there but you should not be trailing

Two people can’t have same mind and thoughts
Still they live together with equal rights
No one encroaches or imposes will upon each other
We are definitely bringing glory to family and father

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gan Chennai 23 June 2010

Great Gentle Man. Keep writing to keep your neurons active.

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Argum Sheth 22 June 2010

We know how far to go and stop No sadness even if show flop Stiff competition like walking on rope Not losing sight and keeping live the hope....nice preposition always to be....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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