An Imbalance Of Feeling Poem by Not Long Left

An Imbalance Of Feeling

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Sometimes it feels so right
wherein the interference of
the outside world is muted.
Where the world rains down
elsewhere and I am sitting,
sipping a perfect beer feeling
its perfect release.
Yet sometimes it feels so wrong
like walking past a childs grave.
It is this imbalance of feeling
that enables us to truly Feel.

Sunday, July 9, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: rains,sometimes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 09 July 2006

Please correct Imbalance to make a brilliant poem out of this. H

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