Sarvesh Kulkarni

Rookie (22-10-1990)

An Insight...Probably. - Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Into
some scattered breaths
of bygone moments…
Into
The abyss of broken imagination.
I delve myself,
and drown in their fantasy.

What is real?
And what unreal?
I cross the boundaries of existence
and realize, that there were none.

In the flow of wanton life,
I gather the deathliness of it all.
And the oncoming darkness,
brings with it,
the joy of non-existence,
or the existence of joyless ecstasy?

Guide me….O lord….
to that place,
where I shall close my eyes,

……and see.


Comments about An Insight...Probably. by Sarvesh Kulkarni

  • Shekhar Joshi (6/3/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    beautiful.....

    u r brilliant.....
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  • (2/14/2009 10:32:00 AM)

    a deep delved thought and insightful (Report)Reply

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  • (2/10/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    u r now a seasoned poet, sarvesh! (Report)Reply

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  • (2/9/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    As a repeat comment: ... The last comment was my broken imagination though it was not in those lines...the lines i wrote were exactly playing in my mind right that moment so it came out instantly. 'The joy of non-existence...was really a deep line for me. thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/8/2009 2:28:00 AM)

    'In the flow of wanton life,
    I gather the deathliness of it all.
    And the oncoming darkness,
    brings with it,
    the joy of non-existence,
    or the existence of joyless ecstasy? '.......such deep thoughs...great my friend.
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  • (2/7/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    'The joy of existence and the existence of joyless ecstasy'...clicked my thought.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (2/2/2009 1:27:00 AM)

    amazing dude....nw........daz hw a poem shud b.......great....i took tym to get the scene.....well........gr8 write man.......kewl....thanx man! ! ! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 1, 2009



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