...Lost... Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Lost...

Rating: 5.0


Hey…

I am lost
in these alleys
of obscurity.
huge enough
to suck me in.
small enough
to abandon me.

My heart is trembling,
like a morning leaf.
Wet,
with a slight touch of insecurity.

Why does life
present its wholeness
with a mystical mystery?

Like some ancient corridors,
lit enough,
to reveal their darkness…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 15 April 2009

ur poems reflect maturity far beyond your age!

1 0 Reply
Allemagne Roßmann 18 April 2009

'All i need is this rhytm divine and lost in the music this heart wolverine' I will go with what Indira Ji said just below the poems are beyond maturity but whatever it reflects your spirit. A maximum from me for this not restrainting spirit.

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 09 April 2009

touching verses with great imagery, nice simile and metaphors used...well expressed poem.........Thanks

0 0 Reply
Vaibhav Pandey 10 April 2009

some wonderful imagery used in this fine write......artful.....10

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 10 April 2009

You are a fine imagist. Your last stanza is profound indeed. Kindest regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Ch J Satyananda Kumar 27 June 2009

Quite an expressive poem. Kudos, Sarvesh!

0 0 Reply
Maitreyee Joshi 20 June 2009

a lovely piece of work, very vocal.thanks10

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Very beautiful poem. 10 with pleasure.

0 0 Reply
Surya . 15 May 2009

a very expressive poem.sublime thoughts.nice to read.voted 10 surya

0 0 Reply
Vinod Ak 22 April 2009

superb poem! profound thoughts flowing fabulously!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success