Thursday, August 27, 2015

An Ode To Pasta Comments

Rating: 4.5

Spaghetti, spaghetti, you are like confetti
Whether hot as lava
Or as cold as a yeti
Oh how I love spaghetti.
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Darby Holmes
COMMENTS
Anonymous 17 November 2020

You're so great at rhyming! I love this poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 July 2017

Write comment. A good humour. A good start. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 05 September 2015

The question as to whether pasta could cause indigestion - am not in a position to answer since am not a dietician. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Paul Warren 27 August 2015

An Italian delight that was fun to read. Thankyou.

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 August 2015

Spaghetti Lasagne Ravioli Gnocchi All this great pasta.. I wonder.. your name is not Italian, but maybe you've some ''Italian genes'' in your genoma.. ;) greetings from Italy

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2015

A fun and nicely written poem, Darby. Thanks

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