An Open Book Poem by June FeirCruz

Nice metaphor, well carried through. An enjoyable read, thanks June.

oh what a book of love scintillating over the its pages of remniscence glamour still elicits art of love delving the warmth ftrom within, ...wonderful depiction of love from within, ingeniously wrought by imagery, superbly passionate,10+++, thanks for sharing

i really really like that poem, that was powerful in every way...really like the end....this is one of my favorites that Ive read on poemhunter...really nice,10000! ! ! ! !

It's a shame, June, but we men can be dense sometimes. We may see a pretty gal walk by on the street and fall head over heels for her, while the girl next door has a crush on you is thought of as a friend only! It happned to me once, where a girl left plenty of clues for me to see if I had my eyes open, but it wasn't until she told me how she felt about me that I woke up! Your fine poem suggests much the same thing. Sometimes you just have to hit a guy over the head with something to get his attention! Though your charming write doesn't say it, it appears that's what's need in this case! Carl.