An Uncluttered Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

An Uncluttered Love.

Rating: 5.0


The baggage that comes with affairs
Today can be heavy, and needs
Skill to unload. It contains rarely
Anything more than scared, bruised seeds
Of hurt, or frustrated anger,
Which, if not distilled into love
Will grow hard and burst, banging
The life out of any fresh move
To conduct an affair with sense.
Hurt needs healing first, and past pain
Will never bring ease to present
Deeds, so forgive and forget. Shame
At admitting the blame will lead
To an unending wheel which spins
Nowhere at all. Anger only feeds
Fires of hate, so why not begin
Afresh and unclutter the heart.
New love deserves a decent start.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Wells 24 March 2009

I agree totally with Susan... Very wise words...good advice. Again, superbly written

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Fiona Davidson 19 March 2009

It certainly does Fay...wonderful write....but first you have to know the whys though in order to forgive...Fi 10+++

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Sid John Gardner. 19 March 2009

Easier to fester with hate than to come to terms with reality. Sid.x.

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Tia Maria 19 March 2009

Skillfully said Ms Slimm... real love starts from within... ; -) Who we gonna call... 'Clutter Busters'

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LOVEFOOL Aka 19 March 2009

Great write full of sense and good advice 10+

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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