An Underwater Love Affair Poem by sylvia spencer

An Underwater Love Affair

Rating: 5.0


Beneath the fathoms, of salty waves,
is a world of splendour and under water caves.
Rainbow coloured coral, that's sharp to touch,
set in under water beauty that we both love so much.
Deep in a search for lost pirate booty,
we came across a world of outstanding beauty.
We found a wreck, we had not seen before.
We could see she was a Gallion, a Spanish Man of War.
Into her hull we swam like fish in this underwater haven,
of ecstasy and bliss.
We found a ship, but there was no booty,
but we did find love and underwater beauty.
In a world that's free and full of wonder,
but not if man makes another stupid blunder.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 10 June 2006

All very romanitc stuff, galleons, and treasure trove. Nice subject, nicely constructed and flowing well. Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2006

If we search deep enough then we may see the answers within a sea of our own or others experiences.Love Duncan

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Scarlett Treat 15 March 2006

Rosie, this is beautiful! I feel as tho' I shall come face to face with a bubble-blowing fish any moment! Great work, but you need to check comma placement. Scarlett

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