You climbed over
my silence
somehow got around
my shyness
paid no attention whatsoever to
my many many
expensive defences!
'Hi' you smiled
nonchalantly
standing just outside
my heart
& almost scaring me to death
with your love!
Those last lines are astoundingly good! I do understand how one can be scared to death by love, its magnitude can overpower us and overwhelm us to the point that resistance isn't any option.... Brilliantly put Donall. HG: -) xx p.s. I listened to your reading of poetry, it was lovely. xx
...to climb over one's silence is a good start of a meeting, a wonderful start of a poem and a very good metaphor... the one standing just outside the other one's heart (just before to enter it) ... chronicle of an affair from the viewpoint of the heart, part 1 :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I had to come back to this poem cause it's been haunting me since I read it. The lines 'you stood outside my heart', are so good and describe perfectly the behaviour prior to actually leaping into the unknown. I love it! In fact I'm adding it to my favourites... HG: -) xx