And Boo! And There Goes My Imaginary Maginot Line! Poem by Dónall Dempsey

And Boo! And There Goes My Imaginary Maginot Line!

Rating: 4.8


You climbed over
my silence

somehow got around
my shyness

paid no attention whatsoever to
my many many

expensive defences!

'Hi' you smiled
nonchalantly

standing just outside
my heart

& almost scaring me to death
with your love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 09 February 2009

I had to come back to this poem cause it's been haunting me since I read it. The lines 'you stood outside my heart', are so good and describe perfectly the behaviour prior to actually leaping into the unknown. I love it! In fact I'm adding it to my favourites... HG: -) xx

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Original Unknown Girl 05 February 2009

Those last lines are astoundingly good! I do understand how one can be scared to death by love, its magnitude can overpower us and overwhelm us to the point that resistance isn't any option.... Brilliantly put Donall. HG: -) xx p.s. I listened to your reading of poetry, it was lovely. xx

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Onelia Avelar 03 February 2009

...to climb over one's silence is a good start of a meeting, a wonderful start of a poem and a very good metaphor... the one standing just outside the other one's heart (just before to enter it) ... chronicle of an affair from the viewpoint of the heart, part 1 :)

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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