And Hi To You

Rating: 3.6

All the hootin' and tootin'
and the fancy fallutin
only shows that you mock
right from under your rock.

But what is the reason
is it ridicule season
in that case, if I may
would you please go away.

Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 13 September 2005

Nicely put...I don't think I could have said it better!

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Jerry Hughes 03 July 2005

brevity, wonderful brevity, and hi to you too

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 June 2005

Thanks Lawrence (I think) , but in 820 poems you might find some more basic verse........... Which one did you sacrifice? H

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Herbert, this is the first 'basic' verse I have read from you! I like it and it says what you feel. It's not a practiced, lectern delivery! It get's to the point and I guess this is what i've been wanting to see from your writings! We all have 'standards' and I thank you for satisfying one of mine! 'And Hi To You' says quite matter-of-factly to buzz off. If you don't like what's happening here, go annoy someone else! I like this very much!

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