And Look Down Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

And Look Down

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I share and believe
Each word in real life
That life is to be lived
With full length and must be survived

My heart certainly bleeds
When find street full of blood
By work of some fanatic man
Acted under influence as inhuman

Where is it written?
Blood for blood and life for life even
Even it there is some mention
I refuse to go for its retention

I will not make my poor brethren to suffer
Because they are not in position to offer
Not strong enough to raise voice
Decide their course with simple choice?

I witness the attack on holy places
Where prayers are offered by people from different races!
They are black, white rich and poor
In real terms, brothers and neighbors

What makes door wide open?
What drives wage in between and creates hatred all of sudden?
If it is written somewhere in any holy book
I can only express unhappiness and look down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 November 2013

Look down Guilty Pleasure2 hours ago On ignorance, violence and poverty. This is not the way of any faith. Great job!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 November 2013

Nice KR BALAKRISHNAN11 minutes ago Let us look down; and yearn for a peaceful co-existence.Good and thought-provoking poem. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 November 2013

Not my cup of tea Maria Kingsbury16 minutes ago Not bad but I did not enjoy the poem Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago do not you like peace message, you want bloodshed all the times

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 November 2013

I share and believe Each word in real life

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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