And Parting Two Leaves Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

And Parting Two Leaves

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and parting two leaves; them longing.
wild oats what they feel, when i watch.
and gentle each breeze, it starts them.
while stalks tremble and flutter apart.
above them one branch, never touches.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 26 September 2009

The lines are beautiful and memorable, and remind me of a fresh breeze.. (smile)

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Tai Chi Italy 26 September 2009

I like the way you have imparted this poem to us my friendly poet! separating the line and yet totally together in meaning. So sad the last line never touches, maybe one day they will travel as one sweet rhyme. Smiling at you Tai

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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