And The Cute Was Dead Poem by Khalid Saifullah

It is very sad poem having a warning to young mass to maintain discipline. Beautiful composition.

i 'could not resist' the title. Sometimes we become so much care less, ....i would use careless here. a couple other minor suggestions i will not bother you with now. a fair warning to all readers re 'kids and electricity'! ! ! ! bri :)

A nice advice.............................

Truly, carelessness is a sign of danger mongering near.

Yeah we heard this too. Tragic! It's great n sympathetic of u to record it in a well written poem. So evryone wil be careful. Pls do coment my latest poem too.

sad but many mothers are careless as they can't visualise what can happen do read my two poems moms smiles and mothers day today u will recall

This is a valuable write- we forget what we use so much and we must not forget or we shall lose a lovely child. Valuable write. I liked your creative use of The Cute as a way to describe as well as name the child. These children could and should be called The Cute! Excellent word choice.

It is a wonder that more children do not die from household accidents- as best as Mothers and Fathers watch over them, they always find that timy crack in our protectiveness- - I was fortunate that my children survived their behavior- -yet they still roll their eyes when remembering how protective I was [they called it overly-protective! ! ! ]

A poignant write with great message. A very thoughtful poem.

well, normally i would not use cute as a noun as you seem to have done. but poetic license is useful. and it The Cute Was DID help catch my attention. bri :)