And When I've Gone Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

And When I've Gone

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Here was he set to flame, a big hash
And half-wit, now consigned to grey ash
Spare tears, all the ho-hum,
Gone hast he as had come,
Lifetime of fruits to fetch, right with rash!

If man's born to burn, smoulder all life—
Let this fire of last pyre be no strife.
Death's to lose the dross left,
Life's remnant, warp with weft,
And whatso spared be by surgeon's knife.
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These two limericks are self epithets. And my wish is expressed in the second: Let a surgeon take away whatso he deems fit for medical use.
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Musings | 04.11.11 |

Monday, October 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 16 March 2019

Further, it just occurred to me, everyone in this time and world is pressed for time. We generally see the poems penned last from among the five given by PH., and give our feedback. Those missed somehow remain missed. But still wonder what can be done about it.

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Bharati Nayak 15 March 2019

Death is the ultimate reality and no body will ever escape.This mortal body will surely turn to ashes... but a wish is expressed to make the body useful for medical use after death. The poem is written with great humanistic view.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 March 2019

Thank you Bharati Nayak for digging out this old poem that was long buried as it were. You have an eye.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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